A review of Something You Once Told Me by Barry Stewart Hunter

Reviewed by Jack Messenger

Something You Once Told Me
by Barry Stewart Hunter
Martin Firrell Company
Paperback: 172 pages, March 9, 2017, ISBN-13: 978-0993178641

Trains and boats and planes – modes of transport abound in Barry Stewart Hunter’s interestingly varied collection of short stories, although the people they convey are seldom up to speed with their own lives. Persons in transit and the mental dislocations they experience are a recurring motif; thematically, however, there is a great deal more going on, much of which is intriguingly elusive. This is a collection for readers who have downed a few years derrière la cravate and know the score, if not themselves; who can recognize confident writing when they read it; who can pluck humour from the jaws of tragedy.

The opening story, Accidental Death of a Novelist, begins to map the territory. Like others in the collection, it is a story in and of a city: ‘London’. That resonant proper noun is followed by a parenthetical dash, whose pause allows us to register its Dickensian connotations. Of course, it is neither necessary nor likely that the first paragraph of Bleak House spring immediately to mind, but its long, dark shadow is evoked nevertheless. Jack is a novelist whose largely unremunerative vocation is bankrolled by Miriam, his hard-working wife. They are sitting in their ‘modest Fiat’ at the traffic lights outside Hampstead tube station, listening to the car’s ineffectual wipers squeaking in the rain, and arguing about his unpublished novel. ‘I thought we’d agreed it was about London,’ says Jack querulously, whose earlier attempt at amplifying his theme – ‘The human heart in conflict with itself’ – could stand as the subject of the entire book. Accidental Death of a Novelist details the emotional self-pillaging required of a creative mind, the peevish desire to be understood if only one didn’t have to explain all the time, the stresses and surprises of love.

Beginnings are often difficult, but Hunter is exceptionally good at them. ‘It was Bennett who found the first dog’ begins The Dog Murders, the strongest story of the collection, whose characters inhabit a kind of dingy Greeneland, replete with vicarious liability and occasional moments of grace. Another London story, it makes an outsider fret at his or her ignorance of the city and the significations of its geography. Bennett’s shortcut home from work as a hospital porter through Highgate Wood is a sad and menacing metaphor for his own young existence, with ‘little relief, little dimensional relief’, and ‘the insolent kiss of ivy in the dark’. Bennett is anxious to please and  placate, but the direction of his life is not in his hands and he knows it: geography correlates with outcomes. He comes across a dog strung up and recognizes something of himself in its cursory life and lonely death. It is a peculiarly upsetting and frightening image; one thinks of traditional representations of Vodou and witchcraft, but it remains inscrutably sinister.

In many of Hunter’s stories, relationships between people and with the world at large need to be renegotiated, often in fraught circumstances, whether it be ‘in a packed Central line carriage several metres below the busy Bayswater Road’ (New Shoes) or with a beribboned government minister wearing an Arsenal football shirt in an office in Juba (Incident at Juba). Masculinity is constantly under threat amid the lies, accommodations and deceptions of marriage,  friendship and society. For instance, the synapses of middle-aged Clive practically pop and fizz while his mind navigates a straight line from banality to tragedy:

Now their train driver apologised in the mellifluous whisper of customer relations – they were being held at a red light in order to even out the gaps in the service. Even out the gaps? Shouldn’t they be working to reduce or, better still, to eliminate those gaps? Clive thought about it for a moment and felt a ripple of rage spread from his heart to his head and back again. That was the way it was now. Every corporate slogan was a parody of the truth. The most routine slight became a personal injustice that had Clive’s name written on it. He was without influence. He was powerless to affect the destinies of men. At fifty-three his life – its range or scope or compass – was heading south. (New Shoes)

This is age talking, when the young have become a separate species and older male minds tend to mystery and longing. ‘If only the film could be wound backwards’ is a recurring plea of Clive and assorted kindred spirits. Their favoured cultural references are to things long past but which remain doggedly persistent emblems of their youth – John Lennon outside the Dakota building, Blood on the Tracks, Zager and Evans.

Hunter is unperturbed by the pathetic fallacy (‘the last sky-scraping bullet returned sheepishly to earth’) and his writing occasionally slips into preciosity or defies logic: ‘clattering silently’, for example. Yet ‘shy knuckles’ is exactly right in its context, as is ‘the twinkling streets of Knightsbridge beckoning like jungle runways’ (both from New Shoes). And this description of pub regulars is wonderful:

And the pink-faced drinkers might have known each other for years. They were physically intimate with one another, leaning close as they spoke and stroking each other’s arms with the tenderness of teenage lovers at the edge of the reservoir. (The Lucky Dust)

Every now and then, remarks with their tongues hanging out suggest themselves as statements of intent: ‘Every journey towards recovery or redemption has its defining moment of crisis or breakdown’ (The Lucky Dust); ‘We’re just innocent bystanders, right?’ (Good Friday, Primrose Hill); ‘He had a function. Ah, joy! … It was enough to keep Denholm sane’ (Denholm’s Epiphany). Not inappropriately, the sad, bewildered face of character actor Denholm Elliott came to mind when reading this story, which strikes out in a new direction with a surreal opening: ‘If, in happier times, you had suggested to Denholm he might turn himself into a chair he would have laughed at you.’ Surrealism becomes literalism when Denholm subsequently experiences a pointillist dissolution/amalgamation with the physical world.

From Incident at Juba onwards the stories tend to lose focus. In my opinion, The Metaphor Coast is the least successful; overlong, its tale of a rain of fish on Valencia relies too much on the writer’s undoubted technical skill in associating ideas and images, its loquacity  reminiscent of William Saroyan, whom I find unreadable. Seven Sisters tries too hard to be not about anything but itself, its characters’ path to self-immolation potted with unlikely similes.

Good Friday, Primrose Hill redeems the second half of the collection. Its description of two, simultaneous, live and literal reenactments of Christ’s crucifixion, voted on by ‘innocent bystanders’, is a serio-comic extension of current commercial logic, and perhaps the ultimate absurdity of the media’s continuing distortion of all that makes us human. The point seems to be that the very act of ranking competing Golgothas renders them valueless – empty signifiers, after all, form the perfect crown of thorns for a population anaesthetized by pervasive trivialization.

In other words, maturity is in question throughout this collection, for in its trembling hands lies our wimpering future. Its pleasures and perils mostly traverse the male psyche, but women also make the journey, and not merely as adjuncts to men. I prefer the London stories, which make the normal and familiar distinctly strange, but Something You Once Told Me will, I believe, appeal to readers patient enough to read and reread tales that do not disclose their secrets all at once.

About the reviewer: Jack Messenger is a UK-based writer and reviewer of literary fiction, who also blogs about writing, film and anything else that takes his fancy. He copyedit Interventions, the International Journal of Postcolonial Studies, and is currently a submissions reader for Red Line, an online literary journal. His novel, The Long Voyage Home, is doing the rounds of agents and publishers. He can be found at his blog http://jackmessenger.co.uk/, which can also take readers to all the usual social media places where he is keen to be followed and liked.